Carpe Diem Special #217 Dolores’ 1st paintbrush flowers (tanka)
Okay, so I’ll admit it’s kind of awkward to write a poem in response to your own poem. I was glad Chèvrefeuille, our host included the music inspiration that the first poem was written from. I think, I like this tanka better. Hope that you find the poems for this month’s specials inspirational.
echo of the loon
across the lake
twilight kisses the edge
of summer’s last sunset