Carpe Diem #1523 H.F. Noyes’ … rusty toy truck (Renga With …)
bright fall day
the brook wanders off
its shimmer lingers
wittering pine siskins
flashing yellow
raking aside leaves
on the backyard pond
I release the moon
a koi breaks its hold
in a wake of ripples
evening walk
the creak of my boots
invades the stars
stirrings of crickets echo
in the distance an owl’s screech
full moon rising
nowhere on the empty beach
to hide our love
seeds of passion surge
a stolen kiss returned
as if nothing happened
the crow there
the willow here
walk continues
down forgotten trail
rusty toy truck
stuck on the mudbank
a cargo of blossoms
filtered light of a street lamp
illuminating sakura
© H.F. Noyes © Dolores
October 21, 2018 at 8:00 pm
Excellent renga with Noyes.
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October 22, 2018 at 3:17 am
Thank you
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November 2, 2018 at 1:23 pm
Nice progression.
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