Renga With Basho #9 A Mark On The Wall
path of the sun
the hollyhock leans into
early summer rain
shallow roots struggling
for a deeper ballast
don’t be like me
even though we’re like the melon
split in two
neglected and forgotten
our relationship decays
wait awhile
cut the soy beans to the sound
of monks beating bowls
sync the rhythm of our lives
press my heart to yours
summer rain
where the poem card peeled off
a mark on the wall
your words scaring my heart
crumbling tear stained paper
building a bridge
between snow-covered mountains
white egrets
flimsy patch bares its limit
broken threads dangle loosely
plovers fly away
the evening grows later with
cold mountain winds
our hands linger momentarily
last touch as we separate
© Matsuo Basho (Tr. Jane Reichhold, taken from: Basho, the complete haiku)
September 28, 2018 at 12:20 am
Enjoyed.
Check your link on the prompt at Carpe Diem. It links to the WordPress editor, and not to your renga.
Ken
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September 28, 2018 at 1:52 am
Thanks! /llI try to fix it.
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September 28, 2018 at 9:09 pm
Awesome renga Dolores … Basho would have enjoyed it a lot.
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September 29, 2018 at 8:04 am
Thank you Kristjaan, Your praises leave me blushing..
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