Carpe Diem Crossroads #13 chilly coolness
two haiku to work with:
chilly coolness
my feet on the wall
for a midday nap
the color of wind
planted artlessly
in a garden of reeds
© Matsuo Basho (Tr. Jane Reichhold)
colorful wind
afternoon serenade
flowers sway along
colorful wind
twirling all the linen
this wash day
afternoon serenade
resting in the oak’s shade
feet dangling in brook
flowers sway along
as the air is stirred
by working women
July 15, 2018 at 7:42 pm
A very nice fusion haiku Dolores and your troiku is awesome.
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July 16, 2018 at 5:43 am
Thanks for your kind words. I love writing Troiku!
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August 20, 2018 at 12:16 am
I am so glad to hear that you like creating Troiku. It’s really a nice way of “playing” with haiku.
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