Carpe Diem Weekend-Meditation #24 Revise That Haiku
in the moonlight,
the color and scent of the wisteria
seems far away
© Yosa Buson (1716-1784)
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Adas Poetry Alcove 
March 21, 2018 at 7:27 pm
Nice revision … I like your haiku even more than the original.
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March 21, 2018 at 9:57 pm
Thank you!
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