Autumn Retreat Day 15
autumn drifts
the silence between us
ever growing
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Adas Poetry Alcove 
August 6, 2017 at 7:34 am
I like the ambiguity of this haiku – the silence could be a falling out, where a couple no longer speaks to each other or it could be that comfortable silence when two people are so comfortable with each other they don’t need to talk to communicate. even the image is ambiguous – the bench is empty but the sun is shining and the colours are warm.
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August 6, 2017 at 10:54 am
Thanks Kim, glad you enjoyed.
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August 6, 2017 at 11:32 am
Nice one ! Kim is so positive about it . When I read it the first image is about parting of two lovers .
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August 7, 2017 at 12:28 am
I thought of the parting too.
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August 7, 2017 at 7:11 am
Me too !
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August 12, 2017 at 12:38 am
Sadness …
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