Carpe Diem #1190 spring wind (supuringu waindo)
spring wind
grass ruffles and bends
violets quiver
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scent of lilac
carried on the spring wind
rousing moonlight
spring wind
tickles flowering clusters
on the maple tree
Adas Poetry Alcove 
April 17, 2017 at 4:12 pm
I especially like the second haiku – even more so if I swap the 1st and 3rd lines so it begins with the ‘rousing moonlight’, which is a fine image, I think 🙂
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April 17, 2017 at 9:14 pm
I like your idea Blake. I think that might be stronger.
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