Revise that Haiku

Carpe Diem Special #193 Revise That Haiku … a trip along memory lane

Daibutsu no katahada no yuki toki ni keri

the snow has melted
on one shoulder
of the Great Buddha

© Shiki

snow has melted
on only one side
of the bird feeder

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Lichen and moss bloom
on the sun worn side
of  the wooden cross