Carpe Diem Special #179 Tom D’Evelyn “The Held Breath: Sound and Silence in a Haiku”
Tom D’Evelyn “The Held Breath: Sound and Silence in a Haiku”
the whine of the leaf blower
the leaves the leaves keep falling
silently © Tom D’Evelyn
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autumn sun
sets fire to the trees
just before dusk
a movement
amongst the shadows
then nothing
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walk through the woods
dry leaves crunching underfoot
birds strangely silent
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October 31, 2015 at 9:56 am
These are 3 very real, tragic and yet so sharp. I sincerely like all 3 very much. The last is a gem, the second sad, and the first a nice touch. THE LAST REALLY IS THE GEM.
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October 31, 2015 at 1:34 pm
Thank you Hamish. Your opinion means a lot to me.
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October 31, 2015 at 6:57 pm
A wonderfully sensual trio.
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October 31, 2015 at 7:03 pm
Thanks Janice, glad you like them.
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November 3, 2015 at 2:02 am
What a nice trio of haiku, what can I say more than already has been said above … chapeau! Your third haiku is not only a gem … it’s a masterpiece. I think even that this one is one of your best haiku.
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November 3, 2015 at 6:54 am
Thanks Kristjaan! blushing
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