In response a Troiku and a Tanka for Carpe Diem Special #163 Lolly’s fifth a peony bush (tanka)
laden with tears
the peony blossom
bows to the ground
laden with tears
the peony begins to blossom
drinking in joy
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the peony blossom
spills it’s fragrance
into the dawn
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bowing to the ground
peony bush abounding with flowers
quivers in moonlight
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trembling in the dawn
peony bush spills her beauty
onto the terrace
twilight falls on soft pink petals
waltzing into night
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August 25, 2015 at 2:18 pm
nice nice nice tanka
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August 25, 2015 at 6:52 pm
Thanks!
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August 25, 2015 at 8:37 pm
I can see you enjoyed writing these -romance abounds
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August 26, 2015 at 6:42 pm
Very nice troiku Dolores … nice images hidden in the three (horses) and your tanka is a beauty.
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August 26, 2015 at 11:33 pm
Thanks Kristjaan -was not sure if anyone would pick up on the hidden ideas.
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August 29, 2015 at 12:41 pm
Very nice.
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August 30, 2015 at 7:49 am
A beautifully delicious write … I really enjoyed this very much Dolores. Thanks for linking in!
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August 30, 2015 at 10:55 pm
Glad you enjoyed!
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August 31, 2015 at 4:43 am
Very much!
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