Carpe Diem Tokubetsudesu #55 Jen (Blog It Or Lose It)
in the meadow
watching shooting stars
lost in ourselves
we travel the universe
one mystery at a time
Carpe Diem Tokubetsudesu #55 Jen (Blog It Or Lose It)
in the meadow
watching shooting stars
lost in ourselves
we travel the universe
one mystery at a time
Adas Poetry Alcove 
August 5, 2015 at 2:21 am
That captures the feeling of seeing a shooting star perfectly.
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August 5, 2015 at 3:50 am
Thanks Suzanne
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August 5, 2015 at 5:25 am
Very dreamy and romantic.
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August 5, 2015 at 5:38 am
Like the vision of travelling the Universe … one mystery at a time …
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August 5, 2015 at 11:50 pm
Love does that raises us to highest heights
Much love…
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August 6, 2015 at 5:35 pm
A wonderful tanka, not only by the choice of words, but also by the hidden layer of sensuality and attraction
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