Carpe Diem #675 Leaves
after the rain
to leaf tips
at a gentle touch
quiver in autumn sunlight
Poet, Avid Gardener, Quilt Artist
Carpe Diem Haiku Kia
Carpe Diem Haiku KAI, Haiku
June 30, 2015 at 12:37 am
I am doing the rain dance in California!
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June 30, 2015 at 7:09 am
love your second haiku .. though each has its own quality … I wish I’d written the second!
June 30, 2015 at 2:31 pm
That surprises me. I was going to scrap that one. Wasn’t sure it made sense to anyone but me.
July 1, 2015 at 3:17 pm
I’ve recently seen the “Thin Red Line” and there is a scene where a young soldier in the middle of battle touches on of those plants and watches it close … so it has quite a lot of sense to me.
June 30, 2015 at 8:27 am
Didn’t you do well with this prompt!
I have dozens of nice leaf pictures, taken over the years, but can’t come up with anything to say about them in a haiku manner 😦
June 30, 2015 at 2:34 pm
Thank you! I think when we write our own they seem too mundane, but are beautiful to others.
June 30, 2015 at 12:14 pm
The clinging water haiku is exquisite!
Still Holding Their Leaves
June 30, 2015 at 2:35 pm
Why thank you!
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