Omoshiro ya/ kotoshi no haru mo/ tabi no sora [literal translation: exciting!/ this year’s spring also/ journey’s sky]
how enticing
in the spring of this year
again on a journey © Basho (trans. Jane Reichhold) (spring 1689)
anticipation
children piled in the car
among the suitcases
~~~
just before the climb
at the foot of the mountain
looking in awe
Adas Poetry Alcove 
May 16, 2015 at 4:33 pm
Very nicely done! I like these – the sense of anticipation really comes through 🙂
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May 18, 2015 at 11:09 am
Thank you!
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May 17, 2015 at 4:53 am
Very nicely done … Bastet.
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May 18, 2015 at 2:53 am
Thanks, glad you enjoyed.
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May 17, 2015 at 10:02 am
Wow! Loved both of them!
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May 18, 2015 at 11:08 am
Thanks! So glad you enjoyed.
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May 17, 2015 at 5:07 pm
Yeah!! Adventure is afoot!
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May 18, 2015 at 2:54 am
…at step every!
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