Carpe Diem #728 Summer Robe

summer robe
I’ve not yet finished
removing the lice                      © Basho (Tr. Jane Reichhold)

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tangled in the folds
of my summer robe
a spring breeze

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bare skin
beneath summer robe
caressed in satin

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I have to laugh at my attempts on this prompt. I thought the following one sounded good -when I looked at it later I realize it might be read as a more personal kind of wind.  Good for a laugh any way.

gentle breeze
exhales beneath
summer robe

 

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