Carpe Diem Special #141, Kala Ramesh’s “lotus viewing”
Trying to decide which of these two I like better
the heart
and the lotus
opening
– – –
the heart
beginning to bloom
with the lotus
Carpe Diem Special #141, Kala Ramesh’s “lotus viewing”
Trying to decide which of these two I like better
the heart
and the lotus
opening
– – –
the heart
beginning to bloom
with the lotus
Adas Poetry Alcove 
April 9, 2015 at 2:37 pm
Oh the first! Really divine! You kept everythig tight. six words, and so much opened!
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April 9, 2015 at 4:41 pm
Thanks, I appreciate the incite!
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April 9, 2015 at 3:20 pm
resonating divinity, perfect
much love…
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April 9, 2015 at 3:52 pm
Personally I think each one is a gem unto itself … each has it’s own quality. Hard to choose between the two, but perhaps the first has an edge.
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April 9, 2015 at 4:42 pm
Thanks for the comments! :0)
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April 10, 2015 at 8:48 am
My pleasure!
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April 15, 2015 at 5:35 pm
I would surely go for the first Dolores …. that’s a very strong spiritual haiku.
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April 16, 2015 at 8:22 pm
Thanks Kristjaan! I value your opinion. Now that I reread them after ten days, the second, does not compare to the first.
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