Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge #76 Hamish Gunn’s “only emptiness”
alzheimer’s
in the space between the trees
only emptiness
without emptiness no forest (HG)
with only emptiness
I search the space to find you
in the space between the trees
only emptiness
without emptiness no forest (HG)
in your mind’s empty spaces
no more room for you and me
in the space between the trees
only emptiness
without emptiness no forest (HG)
in the empty spaces
I’m sure you still climb trees
Adas Poetry Alcove 
March 6, 2015 at 5:03 pm
Just look at that wonderful photograph…that first finish is haunting, memorable – the third one, just lovely, feels personal — I recognise me in it! Wonderful! I amoff to read your Medium haibun!
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March 7, 2015 at 12:10 am
Glad you enjoyed them – afraid my last couple of haibun have been a little lame. Didn’t think more than one person read them.
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March 7, 2015 at 11:02 am
Great post … A simply lovely series and I’m especially partial to the forth one … and I simply love the photo.
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March 8, 2015 at 6:48 pm
My grandfather took lots of photos before he married my grandmother. My uncle let me copy all of them. They are so fun to look through.
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